haz vs nakedsnake 187

[hazerd]

u wanted to battle here i am bring it
no bitin recyclin d/r
explained votes only
3-0 kno 4-1 tko or 5 vote win
blind spit
6 bars
due 24 hours after first drop


spittin fiery verbal attacks that burn to tha max
how can this guy claim he's a dog? when he can't even burden a cat
murkin u back leavin u dazed like u were workin for crack
only time u pullin shit is when u havin a jerk n a whack
born to perform like a hurricane i'll bring a storm to ya dorm
like all ya job applications on mics i'm appauled wit ya form
put tha saw to ya jaw point and laugh as u fall to tha floor
in ya wet dreams is tha only time this cat's affordin to ball
float like a butterfly n sting like a bee swing do my thing like ali
u weak n plastic as ken n barbie so aint no way u gon win fightin g's
u talentless so ya might begin bitin me but i strike wit lightnin speed
u ever elevatin in tha rap game is like bin likin me (osama bin laden)

[hazerd]

u gon drop or what snake??

[NakedSnake187]

Yow, that weak verse was a *sign* that ya falling *behind*,
First ya don't like Muslims then ya come out wit' Muhamoud Ali *lines*,
That shit was fucked up you bringing the heat rarly & *Hardly*,
Against me you'll *fall* ya plays wit' *dolls* & has errections over Ken & *Barbie*,
You have no *fame* you're the one who needs to really elevate ya *game*,
That shit was so whack ya got yo self a spot in the hall of *shame*,
All that shit was whack so stop being so motherfucking *careless*,
Osama does like ya 'cause him & his wife are yo biological *parents*,
This guy is mad 'cause when you was in school in ya GCSE they *failed ya*,
The story behind you being Australian 'cause you & Osama got immagrated to "Australia*,
It's a *fact* you's retarded just look *back* *at* ya *rap* & you'll see *that*,
It all don't makes sence 'cause dogs don't fucking burden *cats*,

[ThE InFaMoUs ShOw]

structure: HAZ
flow: HAZ
punches: NAKEDSNAKE
personals: NAKEDSNAKE
humor: NAKEDSNAKE
vocab: NAKEDSNAKE
multis: HAZ

this was an okay battle from yah nakedsnake took it
you flipped that ALI line I was feelin that

good showing haz but i think NAKEDSNAKE got you

my vote:

NAKEDSNAKE

[NakedSnake187]

1-0 come on niggaz vote.

[Pay Jay]

The thing I don't get about your rhymes Haz is that you are so inconsistent, like sometimes you spit fire and other times you are nowhere near as good...

My opinions on this battle:

Haz's verse flowed better as it had more multis, but the effect of the punches weren't as powerful, this is perhaps because the multis seemed forced:

"u weak n plastic as ken n barbie so aint no way u gon win fightin g's" - Hazerd

This line was in my opinion the worst of your rhyme, surely you could of thought of a better simile than "barbie", but maybe that isn't your opinion on it.

The personals were what did it for me in this battle, Snake was tryin' to take it to Haz as much as he could but I sensed some subtle personals in Haz's verse but they weren't as obvious:

"First ya don't like Muslims then ya come out wit' Muhamoud Ali *lines*" - Snake

I really liked this line, he flipped all your opinions there, good shit Snake.

Punches - Snake
Personals - Snake
Originality - Snake
Humor - Snake
Flow - Hazerd
Multis - Hazerd

In my opinion the four in which Snake was dominant are the most important fundamentals of a battle, therefore, Snake wins, hands down.

My Vote - Snake

[notes]

Yo Hazerd you defintalety had to work hardr to win this, by droppin first you gave Snake a chance to flip ya scirpt, which he did..an by being able to flip it on you he gained the upper hand...i think if yall gonna battle again, you should drop at the same time so nobody gets that adavantage...but in this particular case Snake gets the vote...cause he flipped the script like a pissed off director...Vote Snake!

[ThE InFaMoUs ShOw]

thread closed NAKEDSNAKE wins by

KO