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Post by vigorous on Mar 20, 2006 11:46:11 GMT -5
20 BARS MAX
3-0 IS K.O.
3-1 IS T.K.O
CHECK-IN BY TUESDAY
VERSES DUE WED. IN A PM TO VIG!
THIS IS DA CHAMPIONSHIP.....SO DROP ON TIME PLEASE!!! 1
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Post by notes on Mar 20, 2006 11:49:46 GMT -5
aight checkin in...i'ma try get the verse in on time fa sure, Konk goodluck man...and mad props on keepin this tourney goin..Konk mad respect for seein this shit through...1
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Post by Konkeror on Mar 20, 2006 12:27:12 GMT -5
Aight, da pre-dated check... good luck to u 2 notez. Hopefully thiz'll be a good battle since sum catz dont kno how to drop. I guess winner getz Vig for da heavy huh? Cant wait.
wun
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Post by vigorous on Mar 22, 2006 17:04:21 GMT -5
NOTES:
I cut your connections like i black out in rap bouts,
be Hazerd Back out! or get ya ankles snapped at "Angles" to tap out....
i'm bout to spazz out...You claimin FU, so let me handle this...
i bet your mans is lips n you was holdin his hand, first faggots to abondon ship...
i'm must've died Twice, just tryin to ressesitate survivors
this Faggot gotta be bareBackin when he's talkin Ruff Ridin..
i'll smash ya screen, grab n stab you with the shards..
right after i i hit proboards22 to put FU up in your heart
I just put you on blast... now let me call in the coroner...
no chance for lastin, run that ass out like foreign corner store owners
need help?spit your diss n I'm a flip my middle finger to the audience
watchin ya get torn apart like a rotte rippin the body off ya limbs...
Faggots spit n highlight *Battle Shit* wit an *asterix*,
crackin my fist on mismatches,after i slapped bitches, that had
a better chance of lastin after hackin ya hands an slashin ya wrists
Faggots is razzed in war, more then dragwhores sent in a *draftpick*...
on the real its been a while since i seen a style
as underdevoloped as a premature penis on a fetus child...
I"ll leave konkerer fucked like bizarre farm sluts...
triple my verse n he's hit wit sixty donkey punches...
KONKERER:
Aight homie fuckin wit da kid will get ur ass-popped/
Cuz me I let da “wordz play” like “bad kidz inna glass-shop”/
U cease to exist basically ur done-itz-simple/
Cuz I “sponsored diz dude’s head” wit my “fundamentalz”(fund da mentalz)/
The truth-winz, so here’z my two-centz, fuck who u-send/
Cuz I “neva took notez seriously” like “F-average studentz”/
Yea Konkeror patrolin-diz-bitch scratch dat ur flow-iz-an-itch/
Since I can make thiz “Light wait” like “controlling-a-switch”/
U need to gain some skillz before u say u need-respect/
Cuz da damage Ive done wont get fixed by a “fema-check”/
U seen-hiz-rep? mine ull hafta get-used-to/
Since I’ve been “eatin catz longa” than what “Sheryl Swoopes-admitz-to”/(She came outta closet couple monthz ago)
I’ll hit ya wit Alice(a list) of punchez in diz “Wonderland”-of-time/
And “erect u beneath my barz” so u could “understand-my-rhymez”/
Yea u getting scared huh? U aint even see-thugz-wit-me/
I gotchu “recycling ur trash” like a “tree-huggin-hippie”/
Fuck ur “reign” datz “bitch-weatha” last good “thread” from u waz from a “stitched-sweata”/
Wanna eevate? I’ll give u an “L” so u’ll finally “get-betta”/(eevate + L=elevate)
KO
Yep My flowz-winnin, how? I got diz hoe-spinnin/
Since I jus “ended hiz Run” like I killed “Joe-Simmons”/(Joe Simmonz=Rev Run)
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Post by vigorous on Mar 22, 2006 17:16:43 GMT -5
STRAIGHT UP I BETTA BRING IT WHOEVER WINS THIS! GOOD ASS BATTLE YALL!
NOTES:
YA VERSE WAS GOOD, I MEAN YA PUNCHES WERE'NT DEADLY BUT YA PERSONALS WAS HOTT! I MEAN BRINGIN UP LIPS AND F.U. HAD ME REMINICIN, YOU DEF. GOT AT THIS CAT....AFTER I READ YA VERSE I WAS LIKE DAMN KONK BETTA BRING IT!
KONK:
YOU DEF. FUCKIN BROUGHT IT, I MEAN YA PUNCHES WAS HARD AND YOU HAD ALOT MORE THAN NOTES, AND YOU KNOW PUNCHES WINS BATTLES, HE GOT YOU ON DA PERSONALS, BUT REALLY PUNCHES OUTWIEGH PERSONALS(WITOUT A PUNCH) IN BATTLES!
SO I GOTTA GIVE IT TO KONK!
VOTE: KONKERER
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Post by Pay Jay on Mar 22, 2006 18:07:22 GMT -5
Well, I've been waiting for this battle for a while, and I definitely wasn't disappointed...
Both of you showed what you were capable of, with deadly results, holy shit, that battle was HOT! thus makin' this battle so hard to vote on, but for sure this battle deserves my opinion in depth:
I'll try and make this easier by breakin' down my favourite lines:
"on the real its been a while since i seen a style
as underdevoloped as a premature penis on a fetus child..." - Notes
While readin' both verses I was overwhelmed by the compexity, but when this bar came up, I burst out laughin' definitely some funny shit, and I like how it flowed.
"i'll smash ya screen, grab n stab you with the shards..
right after i i hit proboards22 to put FU up in your heart" - Notes
The word choice was exquisite, while I was reading it, the flow just was impeccable, and the content was very original, liked that punch alot.
"U seen-hiz-rep? mine ull hafta get-used-to/
Since I’ve been “eatin catz longa” than what “Sheryl Swoopes-admitz-to”/" - Will
That was another humorous line, had me crackin' up, and the the double meanin' for catz/pussy worked very well. Or maybe I just thought that up myself. (Remember that Vig?? Haha still waitin' to hear that line!)
U cease to exist basically ur done-itz-simple/
Cuz I “sponsored diz dude’s head” wit my “fundamentalz”(fund da mentalz)/ - Will
That shit was dope as fuck! And at first I didn't read the brackets and it was still dope, then I re-read, and was like "Holy SHIT! How he do that?!" The word choice on point yet again.
Well haven't had to think about a battle this much.. well... ever. But in my opinion, good personals and punches are what defines a good battle, it's just unfortunate for me that Notes had the slammin' personals and Will had the smokin' punches:
"Faggots spit n highlight *Battle Shit* wit an *asterix*" - Notes
And “erect u beneath my barz” so u could “understand-my-rhymez”/ - Will
Hmm.. this is hard!
But I'll explain imy vote like this, I suppose depending on your opinion on what is more important personals or punches will define the result of this battle, and in my opinion I see it as personals, therefore my vote goes to:
My Vote: Notes
Don't get me wrong, this is the best battle I've seen yet, and I don't mean to sound clichéd but both of you deserved the crown, I just had to find a way to pick.
Peace.
Jay.
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Post by ThE InFaMoUs ShOw on Mar 22, 2006 19:28:55 GMT -5
aiight this was a hard battle to vote but
multis: NOTES
Personals: NOTES
humor: TIE
creativity: KONK
vocab: NOTES
punches: KONK
I think notes eeked this one out wit his personals
and vocab but KONK had a nice verse filled wit punches
i like this line KONK
The truth-winz, so here’z my two-centz, fuck who u-send/
Cuz I “neva took notez seriously” like “F-average studentz”/
see but lines like this
a better chance of lastin after hackin ya hands an slashin ya wrists
Faggots is razzed in war, more then dragwhores sent in a *draftpick*...
on the real its been a while since i seen a style
as underdevoloped as a premature penis on a fetus child...
with vocab and punches that move me but that's me
my vote
NOTES
best battle we have had on this sight by far
good job both of you
respect
100
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Post by vanillagorilla on Mar 24, 2006 10:57:44 GMT -5
both realy good an Notes got a KO right now
but i would of gave
my vote ta: Notes
nice battle thou
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VanillaGorilla
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Post by vanillagorilla on Mar 24, 2006 11:02:04 GMT -5
Oh an good job on win the belt Notes
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Post by vigorous on Mar 24, 2006 11:07:35 GMT -5
thread closed! notes wins by t.k.o.......3-1
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Post by Konkeror on Mar 24, 2006 12:25:56 GMT -5
DA FUCK?!?!?! I LOST?!?!?!....u kno wut, itz cool Im str8 congratz Notez.
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