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Post by vigorous on Mar 10, 2006 16:39:59 GMT -5
BELIEVE IT OR NOT...IT WAS PICKED RANDOMLY!
20 BARS MAX
3-0 K.O.
3-1 T.K.O
CHECK-IN BY SAT.
VERSES DUE SUNDAY IN A PM TO VIG OR SHOW!
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Post by notes on Mar 10, 2006 19:12:00 GMT -5
check check...aight... good luck VG see ya sunday
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Post by vigorous on Mar 14, 2006 15:23:03 GMT -5
NOTES:
when you think of VG think of ships that sink in a wreckage
mass bent actin wreckless, fags hesitant to check in..
VG..you wouldn't be hot if i torched on your syllables...
Like fat chicks in chroderoids... bitch is forcin filler...ohhhhh...
coaxin your roaches in to the open like i was orkin...
blowin smoke an n deport your corpses to the morgue stiff...
YOU stepped outta line? Gorillas but a board bitch
Too dum to see it comin, like Vanilla Whores in Gore Flicks.
get fucked First,..whoah.. n catch axes an hatchets..
like fat kids in basketball..or voters u stand as the last pick..
I"m just a rodeo bull, born bred to check these clowns....
move forwards an gore them, n torture the second round.....
i aint a fag basher but i can't stand cats actin cannabilistic
facts is they rap snackin like smackin a bannana gainst they lips.
i was bred to check fences while Vets bettin a threat in trenches...
you as sensitive as a twelve year old kid bein breast fed...
VANILLA GORILLA:
It's not lookin too good for you in this tourny, but relax
you only gonna get eliminated by Vanilla the first match//
I seen I only got like 20 barz ta the max
for shure this is gonna be bigger than a bitch slap//
You post your shit first or second,
it's still gonna get stomped//
I wouldn't try ta release your CD around the same time as mine
Cus it would be a "Failer ta Launch"
My shit hit shelves, inflate like the price of a gallon of gas
You'll cry for 3 years in a row cuz I'll go tripple platinum on your ass//
People hear your land down under voice and laugh
An' bro your pink shirt yellin out/our down ta ride with all the fags//
You're the player on the court, that always get picked last
the guy that fat girls fuck request you wear a mask//
The unknown Power Ranger, that went on ta become a queen in drag
The only wigger on the site, that I wish we didn't have//
I'm chille cheese french fries
you're just the potato, now do you understand?//
If not there ain't no other way ta break it down to ya, so you can//
I'm just suggestion you stop shootin' for two
And go a little bit bigger before I'm shootin' you//
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Post by vigorous on Mar 14, 2006 15:27:12 GMT -5
UMMMMM......
PUNCHES: NOTES
WORDPLAY: NOTES
STRUCTURE: NOTES
nice verse notes..you took this one hands down...
v.g. not a bad verse just not good enough to beat notes!
vote: notes
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Post by Pay Jay on Mar 14, 2006 17:44:23 GMT -5
Well this was a good battle, but there was only one evident winner.
I'll first discuss my favourite lines from each verse:
Notes:
"YOU stepped outta line? Gorillas but a board bitch
Too dum to see it comin, like Vanilla Whores in Gore Flicks."
Haha, I liked the way you changed his name into a diss, pretty original dogg...
Vanilla:
"I'm just suggestion you stop shootin' for two
And go a little bit bigger before I'm shootin' you//"
I think I got what you meant in the first line, but that was a good overall bar.
I liked quite alot of the lines in both of your rhymes, but overall, I think it broke down like this:
Structure - Notes
Punches - Notes
Wordplay - Notes
My Vote : Notes
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Post by Konkeror on Mar 14, 2006 18:35:46 GMT -5
I dunno, maybe itz me but i waz expectin a lil bit more from both catz. Notez took dis, no doubt. VG had a good verse but it waz more of a keystyle rather than a battle verse. Anyhoo, propz to both catz.
Vote= Notes
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Post by vigorous on Mar 14, 2006 19:53:09 GMT -5
battle closed...notes wins by k.o. 1
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