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Post by vigorous on Mar 10, 2006 16:45:11 GMT -5
20 BARS MAX
3-0 K.O.
3-1 T.K.O
CHECK-IN BY SAT.
VERSES DUE SUNDAY IN A PM TO VIG OR SHOW!
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tEch maN
Junior Member
You gotta be kidding me...
Posts: 98
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Post by tEch maN on Mar 10, 2006 17:07:58 GMT -5
check in
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Post by youngcash on Mar 13, 2006 0:02:29 GMT -5
Check in
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Post by vigorous on Mar 13, 2006 18:43:34 GMT -5
YOUNG CASH:
They call me Young cash nigga I'm tha hottest you'll see//
They call you tech man nigga they ain't talkin bout tha heat//
I take a pistol cock back and leave a hole where you can see//
Or I'll put you in tha grave so all of tha worms can feed//
Leave you floatin upstream like a cat fish swimmin//
Have ya body marked up like Tina Turner and Whitney//,
This ain't tha Bobby Brown show, but my raps is straight crack and ain't no refund nigga you can't take ya rhymes back//
But I can treat em like tha pawn shop and trade em in for somethin but ya raps is so lame that they don't wanna trade for nothin//
Tech man you ain't nothin, Tech man you just a bitch, I'll shoot you wit tha heat and leave you layin next to dog shit//
The chances you gon beat me is Tigger back in tha bassment//
My rhymes is just so cold it'll leave you rappin adjecent//
Stuff you ducktape you while Micheal Jackson rape you//
And while we on tha subject have R.Kelly tape you//
I'll fight for this bitch just like pepe la poue, But I ain't fightin for no hoe up off of Looney Tunes//
I'm fightin to be KING and tha ruler of all these Goons//
But I'll gone and let you be ruler of all tha bafoons//
TECH MAN:
Looks like I'm up against a guy named young (cash)//
All I can say is you need help, lay off the (hash)//
Your brains so burnt out right now you sneeze out (ash)//
Yo you call yourself the punchline (king), I didn't even hear one fucking punchline in the whole damn (thing)//
Even the newbs are making fun of (you), I bet your the white kid at school that comes home black and (blue)//
Thats pretty sad to say the least and thats the under-statement of the (year), I can kick your ass far and (near)//
Honestly dude I'm tired of you playing rap (star), Vanilla Ice bout ready to hit you with his (car)//
Even that made me lean back in my chair, I'll admit that thing with you and Vanilla was (brutal)//
But Vanilla Ice just woke up beside you in bed, and he wants a toaster (strudel)//
I'm not going to even waste my full 20 lines on (you), I'm pretty sure I just schooled (you)//
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Post by vigorous on Mar 13, 2006 18:48:53 GMT -5
not a good battle.....not bein a dick just keepin it real!
no real punchlines from anyone....i seen a couple possibles in both verses...but you didnt make em hit....so just goin by what i see the better verse was young cash's! better structure,better flow, and he dissed techman better!
vote: young cash
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Post by Konkeror on Mar 13, 2006 19:48:50 GMT -5
Thiz iz actually wut I waz expectin from both guyz: nuddin. No punchez, metaz, rhyme scheme'z basic, and structure waz ehh...wut-wut. Well, Ima vote for dat young cash, newborn change...lol j/p cuz he at least took a swing. Tech, u should work on structure and delivery, not to mention everythin else I mentioned.
Vote= Young $
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Post by notes on Mar 13, 2006 23:16:42 GMT -5
Yo tech you gotta come stronger, it may take a bit of time but stick with it, you just didn't really have anything that hit hard...
Thats pretty sad to say the least and thats the under-statement of the (year), I can kick your ass far and (near)//
this line had no placement in your flow.. and ya bars is wayyy too long...
but youngCash i again think ya gotta build your punchlines better..i think Youngcash was more creative wit his verse a it flowed it a bit better....so my vote goes to YoungCash
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Post by vigorous on Mar 14, 2006 19:58:12 GMT -5
battle closed young cash wins by k.o. 1
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