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Post by ThE InFaMoUs ShOw on Mar 3, 2006 2:09:55 GMT -5
CHECK IN BY SATURDAY VRS Do BY MONDAY IN A PM
TO VIG
THANK YOU
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hazerd
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Post by hazerd on Mar 3, 2006 5:00:43 GMT -5
~mic check~
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hazerd
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Post by hazerd on Mar 3, 2006 5:02:21 GMT -5
what's tha rules?
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Post by Pay Jay on Mar 3, 2006 9:01:45 GMT -5
I'm in.
So what is the bar limits etc?
Just the same as last time?
Peace.
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Post by ThE InFaMoUs ShOw on Mar 3, 2006 10:18:30 GMT -5
20 lines max
3-0 ko
3-1 tko
the rest is the same as the last tourney battles
good luck
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Post by vigorous on Mar 7, 2006 11:20:49 GMT -5
JAY G:
You second place, you should stay content//
Because battlin' me will leave your morale with dents//
Trippin' after the realization of this rhyme's "content"?//
Basic flow, and your lyrics match your intelligence//
You Neanderthal, even realize what was meant?//
Similar to the DeVine verse, you got it wrong//
You think he's mixin' morphine with the water in his bong?//
How to beat me, get your rhyme quality doubled//
Lyrically, metaphorically, you don't leave me troubled//
Think you superior cause you knocked Tech out?//
But I'll leave the voters without a "Reasonable Doubt"//
Realize Haz, you "Can't Knock 'This' Hustle"//
I'm Magnus Samuelsson in terms of lyrical muscle//
I know my profile states: "Global Moderator"//
But shit, to you it reads: "Lyrical Dominator"//
Your rhymes make as much impact on mass, as dropped paper//
However, this verbal onslaught hits with the force of a fuckin' crater//
Got metaphor to match that? You thinkin' "I'll do it later"//
Just like Purple Haze this rhyme will insist on you choking//
And leave you asking Vig if there's any chance of a diss revoking//
HAZERD:
my styles "relentless" jay g got "pretentious"
like takin screwdrivers to gunfights i leave u "defensless"
this muslim lovin monkey wanna tryout for "taliban"
that's "callous can" u live wit yaself or would u rather marry an "arab man"
i'll skin ya "ass raw" why ya actin "hard for"
we all know u a fag takin loads like on max "hardcore"
encore? sure i always "deliver" stab u wit glass bottle "slivers"
my flows fire yours so cold i'm startin to get tha "shivers"
ya rhymes tha worst i "heard" it's "absurd" that u even say a "word"
cos u'll get "served" oops star trek conventions on fuckin net "nerd"
u been "beat" so feel tha agony of "defeat" cos u "weak"
through my verse i could "sleep" and u still couldn't "compete"
it's complete time to crown tha lightweight champ "hazerd"
just "hack it" n no i won't hook up wit u "faggot"
go back to makin love "songs" wit elton "john"
cos u panzy this hip hop kid u don't "belong"
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Post by vigorous on Mar 7, 2006 11:26:05 GMT -5
punches: there werent many heavy hittaz in here, but jay had more
structure: jay
flow: jay
personals: jay
in my opinion this was a decent battle, a couple of played punches and lines in each verse, but overall jay def. had da stronger verse 1
vote: jay g
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Post by ThE InFaMoUs ShOw on Mar 7, 2006 13:38:03 GMT -5
OPENER--JAY G
MULTIS--TIE
PUNCHES--JAY G
PERSONALS--JAY G
FLOW--HAZ
STRUCTURE--HAZ
CREATIVITY--JAY G
CLOSER--JAY G
MY VOTE JAY G HIS VERSE HAD ALOTT MORE OF WHAT IT TAKES OT WRITE A GOOD BATTLE VERSE
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bigt
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Post by bigt on Mar 7, 2006 18:50:28 GMT -5
OPENER--tie
MULTIS--haz
PUNCHES--jay
PERSONALS--jay
FLOW--haz
STRUCTURE--haz
CREATIVITY--jay
CLOSER--jay
overall-jay g
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Post by notes on Mar 7, 2006 19:00:55 GMT -5
both of yall need to work on punches an learn how to hurt an opponent...alot potential for punches on both sides...but yall aint connectin....Jay G...kinda felt like the flow fell off a lil in spots...but might just be Me...Haz...i think this was wayyyyyy worse then your battle verse to me...your flow in our battle was off the wall compared to this....you didn't come off as strong as i thought you would...i thought you woulda KO'd Jay witout problem...but i couldn't get in to your verse....
a good example is this line
this muslim lovin monkey wanna tryout for "taliban"
that's "callous can" u live wit yaself or would u rather marry an "arab man"
the second line is wayyyyyyyyyy too long an throws off the flow...
otherlines like this
i'll skin ya "ass raw" why ya actin "hard for"
we all know u a fag takin loads like on max "hardcore"
had potential to be KNockout punches but your delivery led them astray....
Jay G lines like this coulda done damage but they didn't flow right an delivery fucked with you doin any real damage with it
Think you superior cause you knocked Tech out?//
But I'll leave the voters without a "Reasonable Doubt"//
the flow just wasn't fluid enough to hurt Haz...but def. had crazy potential to end the battle half way through
ya lines was the same had potential to do damage but delivery held you up..
my fav lines from Jay was:
Just like Purple Haze this rhyme will insist on you choking//
And leave you asking Vig if there's any chance of a diss revoking//
that was the finisher to End it and get the win
i don't htink battle was easy to break down...and even harder to vote..props to Jay And Props to Haz..both yall had a great chance at takin this title...and like i said i'm surprised that haz didn't kill on this...but Jay gets my Vote...Both yall stay up aight1
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Post by vigorous on Mar 7, 2006 19:13:01 GMT -5
BATTLE CLOSED! JAY-G IS DA LIGHTWEIGHT CHAMPION...CONGRATULATIONS DOGG! 1
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