hazerd vs notes

[hazerd]

due in 24 hrs
make it 20 bar max
no bitin d/r recyclin
3-0 ko or 5 votes win fuck tkos


~checkin in~

[notes]

i got ya verse done, just let me know that you still gonnna drop an i'll put it up. aight peace1

[hazerd]

yeah i'll still drop put yours up n i'll drop

[notes]

i felt your punches,it was like feathers smackin em shins,
i pack trash an strap the lids, on everyone of these HAZbeens...
i put you in check wit a quick Hazerd Assessment...
i aint sayin Wack....... but you rap average at best kid...
might strike his face, wit five mics an a mase,
but i might just ride by while he's chasin lightweights
i'm sacrifice another hopeful rappers life
an not blink twice like broken Hazard lights...
your only hazerd,
sayin the same the shit..... remain basic
while I engrave blades that turn haters to rape victims,
talkin bout aresenal?aim missiles n spray strays from pistols...
heartsstalker darker n death..i'm all spades its gravediggas
you fresh pussie, just hymen breakin on penetration
Sayin you underground, cause you aint makin elevations...
i'm crossin Seas, droppin it off like i'm bombin an Aussie,
i was born plottin like crossin a bin laden KamaKaZees...

[hazerd]

yo mic check one two one two.......ready for death?........


yo u tha "weakest to rap" this fag be "freakin for slaps"
but fulfillin ya homo tendancies tha only time u "beatin an ass"

i "take wins" pissin em off sendin my foe "fake grins"
cos on tha mic i'm god so gainst this phony i'ma "break sins"

"take him" all tha way "out back" but not tha way he thinkin i "doubt that"
this guy's flyin high steppin but he gotta come back to earth to face tha "ground facts"

"rebound n chap" ya "lips" in ya "spits" cos this kid's "claimin crips"
but i don't rep tha most cliche on tha net actions speak louder than words when i'm "aimin clips"

words cut like "razor tips" leavin this purple "hazer ripped"
u couldn't elevate as high as me even if u was "takin trips"

last night i "macked ya bitch" notes walked in so i "slapped tha snitch"
i don't need to kick tha whole bars to rip cos it's like battlin a 10 year old it's a "wrap at six"

[fdsaasdf]

Good Battle...


NOTES
Opener:5
Creativity:6
Entertainment:5
Flow:6
Metaphors:6
Multies:6
Personals:5
Punches:4
Wordplay:6
Finisher:5

HAZERD
Opener:8
Creativity:8
Entertainment:9
Flow:8
Metaphors:8
Multies:8
Personals:9
Punches:9
Wordplay:8
Finisher:9

VOTE = HAZERD
keep up the good work

[devine]

i felt your punches,it was like feathers smackin em shins,
i pack trash an strap the lids, on everyone of these HAZbeens...

^^^liked the way you opened this up...this was dope notes

open: notes
close:haz
punches:notes
personals:notes
wordplay:notes
flow:notes
structure:notes

This was a good battle yall....haz you had a good verse as well, i just felt notes had the better of the 2 in this kid.....

Dev's vote: NOTES

[vigorous]

this was my fav. bar of da whole battle:

Sayin you underground, cause you aint makin elevations...

hazerd you got quotations around shit that aint a punchline, you had a couple decent punches in there, but you didnt really hit em hard! notes creative wit da use of his name, punches hit hard....

vote: notes

[Pay Jay]

Both verses were pretty dope:

Notes - I liked how you used the word "Haz" or "Hazerd" to slay him, that was really cool. I also felt you had the more powerful punchlines.

Hazerd - I liked the flow and all, there was just a lack of personals in my opinion.

Therefore my vote goes to Notes

Favourite quotes:

"Sayin you underground, cause you aint makin elevations..." - Notes

"take him" all tha way "out back" but not tha way he thinkin i "doubt that"
this guy's flyin high steppin but he gotta come back to earth to face tha "ground facts" - Hazerd.

[notes]

yo haz thats 3-1 for me can we close this thread? or you uppin for the fifth vote?..if not...show or vig close the thread

[ThE InFaMoUs ShOw]

3-1

notes wins thread closed