LIGHTWEIGHT TOURNAMENT BATTLE....JAY G vs. CODERED

[vigorous]

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[Pay Jay]

Aiight, I'm in!

We had beef on Network54.com so this'll be good niggas... Blaow!

Yeah I'll have the verse up as soon as C-Red checks in...

[codered]

aight sry been away sending it now

[vigorous]

JAY-G:

Well first let me introduce myself they call one, G//
I'm that MC these title contenders are tryin' to be//
C-Red remember back on "IFB" when I killed you with that complex diss?//
You know after that, you were lookin' for my ass to kiss//
But I wasn't havin it... just another MC to check off the "Conquered List"//
Now you start on this with a used rhyme//
Surely you can think of somethin' new this time?//
In fact it's kinda pointless, coz even you know this title's already mine//
Im'a say it like GZA, I'll slay you with this "Liquid Sword"//
Is this battle gonna die now? or do you need some encouragement to pull the cord?//
You can't mess with my rhyme's quality//
My raps are in fact, the complete opposite of your spelling ability//
Shit by this time you like "Naaaw, this nigga's killin me"//
You were overwhelmed with nerves when the battle stated "Codered Vs Jay G//
Hit me with the best you got, that's something I evoke//
But understand, this rhyme's gonna have endless quotes...//
Lyrically I can take you to pieces, send your body parts via different boats//
Leave you hard to find like some a nigga wearin' a K.K.K. cloak//
Now, you change your name from C-Red to Code Red...//
Fuck that gonna do? You still gonna end up murdered//


CODE-RED:

Fuck this shit, im on my way to the top//
this is straight non-stop hip hop im gona pop//
J-gay ive seen everything yea got, but me shit i still gota lot//
you screwed around, now yea down, on the ground, mouth fulla sock//
with my gun cocked, put to your head you ready to get rocked//
you say yea got this block on lock, but im here to show yea you been blocked//
last night i got fired, but this morning i had over a grand wired//
you dont know what that shit about, im sick and tiered//
gota tell yea agian no doubt, ill have a hitman hired//
even though im willing to do this shit myself//
the look of yea got me so i wanna ralph//
you like an old book man, ready to be put back on the shelf//
so go ahead and relax, cause im spittin pure facts//
if yea mess up im gona have tax, your ass to the max//
muder yea mom dad and even yea pet, give your ass a mill in debt//
in this life game im set, fucker im a vet//
this is the way the streets gota be today, in the end ill make yea all pay.

[devine]

Fav lines:

Jay-G
C-Red remember back on "IFB" when I killed you with that complex diss?//
You know after that, you were lookin' for my ass to kiss//

^^haha good shit

Code-Red
J-gay ive seen everything yea got, but me shit i still gota lot//
you screwed around, now yea down, on the ground, mouth fulla sock//

^^^nice....potential kid

Imma break this down easy

Wordplay-Jay G
Flow- Jay G
Multis- Jay G
Structure- Jay G
Punches- Jay G

Dev's vote- Jay G

peace- 1

[vigorous]

aight here it goes:

punches: jay-g
personals: jay-g
flow: c-red
wordplay: c-red
structure: codered

now in a battle da most important things are punches and personals, so i gotta go wit jay-g!

codered you had a nice verse, but you didnt have any punches or personals and you need that to win battles dogg....ya shit flowed great while jay's verse didnt, and your structure was better, but honestly that dont mean shit in a battle.......work on punches and personals cuz you got da rest of da shit down!
and sayin you'll kill his family...c'mon man its da net...just attack him in ya verse!

[hazerd]

opener-jay
closer-jay
punches-jay
flow-code
mettas-jay
multies-jay
wordplay-jay
creativity-jay
vocab-jay
humor-jay
personals-jay
complexity-jay

vote-jay g

good battle but jay's punches hit alot harder

[ThE InFaMoUs ShOw]

thread closed jay moves on to finals also
nice drop man




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