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Post by vigorous on Feb 28, 2006 11:36:08 GMT -5
20 BARS MAX
3-0 IS A K.O
CHECK IN BY WED.
VERSES DUE FRI.
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tEch maN
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Post by tEch maN on Feb 28, 2006 17:21:05 GMT -5
*check in*
You'll have my verses by friday.
Ok I can't honestly wait any longer, I got 16 barz of fury!
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tEch maN
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Post by tEch maN on Feb 28, 2006 21:05:31 GMT -5
Part of da linchmob, what's dat smell ma-
Just hazerd, ugly as Mic Jager-
Tag the back of hazerd's face, when he approaches ladies they pull out da mace-
Don't you dare raise your voice, cause a P.I.M.P. has friends that would like to make your ass moist-
When an O.G. like me, puts a concert on I won't make you pay and entrance fee-
I'll let you in for free, jus to let you see how a real rap is put together by a real M.C.-
I'll admit you have a clever rhyme or two that zip by, but ultimately your tongues tied-
Now tell me wise guy, do you wanna put a gun in your mouth and just die-
I show no mercy toward the weak, each time I throw out a line I make bitch's shriek-
Your a fucken retard, I'll burn you so bad your skin gets charred-
You You You, your rhymes stink like smelly poo-
I pointed you out to the Doctor and asked if its safe to look like that, he just said get my gat before anybody has a heart attack-
I said no doc you could get more green, get noticed and revolutionize the rap scene-
God knows the doc is better den you, and his age is 82-
14 lines right there, all you can do is stare and wish you had dis nice of hair-
Your rhymes are just pathetic, I guess its just genetic-
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Post by vigorous on Mar 2, 2006 18:01:12 GMT -5
AIGHT WELL HAZERD HAS TILL MIDNIGHT TO DROP A VERSE OR HE'S DQ'D....1
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hazerd
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Post by hazerd on Mar 2, 2006 20:01:14 GMT -5
if we talkin gay clubs then yeah every night "techman" "gets slammed"
i spit "death jams" but tech's weak punches just have no "affect man"
"respect? damn!" stop lyin dawg u aint never "gained none"
ya "brain's young" aolescents talkin shit bout spittin hot disses aint it time u "made some?"
u "phase none" wit ya whack flows n lyrical "concepts"
like a sea captain i'm screamin all hands "on deck" for steppin ya rhymes is mutiny time to "walk tha plank"
it's phenominal how i'm "beatin him" ya should call me jaws tha way i'm "eatin him"
i could be a malnourished ethiopian n still wouldn't come as "weak as him"
i got him "wonderin though" when i come wit them "thunderin flows"
whether he'll be comin home to his bitch tonight, take tha slut i already been "under tha hoe"
"don't provoke" cos i'm sure to make u choke like u "smokin dope"
ya prescence in hip hop is unwanted best start tyin tha noose on ya "over rope"
whatever i drop ya could write back wit ten attempts and still not "defeat it"
call me "concieted" but i think tech should drop tha mic cos gainst me u aint gon "need it"
u need a rhyme tutor or better yet send ya mix tape to "sesame street"
got tech man "regrettin his speech" only thing ya verses good for is helpin toddlers "gettin to sleep"
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tEch maN
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Post by tEch maN on Mar 2, 2006 20:05:51 GMT -5
lol
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hazerd
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Post by hazerd on Mar 2, 2006 20:24:11 GMT -5
vote up ppl
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tEch maN
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Post by tEch maN on Mar 2, 2006 20:26:33 GMT -5
for real
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Post by devine on Mar 2, 2006 21:06:18 GMT -5
Breakin this down:
Flow-Haz
Structure-Haz
Wordplay-Tech
Personals-Haz
Punches-Haz
Fav Lines
HAZ
"respect? damn!" stop lyin dawg u aint never "gained none"
ya "brain's young" aolescents talkin shit bout spittin hot disses aint it time u "made some?"
Haz: you def got potential to be sick on the battle front on this site, sick shit, only thing i would say to you is when you structure your verses dont space between every 2 lines but hey that could also be how you write...PROPS KID
Tech: not a bad drop but a lot of room for improvement dawg, you need to structure your verse alot better and work on your flow kid...also talkin about "SMELLY POO" is not gonna win you a battle man lol...props on the drop tho none the less
DEV's VOTE: HAZ props yall 1
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Post by Pay Jay on Mar 2, 2006 22:00:13 GMT -5
"respect? damn!" stop lyin dawg u aint never "gained none"
ya "brain's young" aolescents talkin shit bout spittin hot disses aint it time u "made some?"
Haha, yeah props for that line nigga.
Yeah you owned him, but that didn't surprise me really.
Breakdown:
Flow-Haz
Structure-Haz
Wordplay-Haz
Personals-Haz
Punches-Haz
Vote - Hazerd
See you in the final nigga.
Peace.
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hazerd
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Post by hazerd on Mar 2, 2006 23:27:54 GMT -5
is it a 3 vote ko to win or what?
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Post by codered on Mar 3, 2006 0:14:00 GMT -5
All haz on that one i gota say.
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hazerd
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Post by hazerd on Mar 3, 2006 0:18:02 GMT -5
so that's a 3-0 ko for me then
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Post by ThE InFaMoUs ShOw on Mar 3, 2006 2:01:51 GMT -5
thread closed haz moves on to finals
good job
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