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Post by vigorous on Feb 27, 2006 20:36:08 GMT -5
20 BAR MAX
3-0 IS A K.O
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tEch maN
Junior Member
You gotta be kidding me...
Posts: 98
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Post by tEch maN on Feb 27, 2006 20:47:47 GMT -5
Ok I guess I'm ready to destroy you, not just you but your whole family too-
You can't keep up with my rhymes cause I rhyme just in time-
To make you look like a retard a fool, it ain't hard to make myself look cool-
Yo check out this shiney new jewl on my finger, you the shitiest rap singer ever-
There was a lickity-lic-loc-tic-tock-knock-knock at the door, opened it up to see your girlfriend damn what an eye sore-
Ok your turn, hope you don't get burned-
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Post by vigorous on Feb 27, 2006 21:01:05 GMT -5
its some unbearable news how ima tear up this newb//
cuz tech man is a less man than a chick wit hair on her boob//
da way vig "eatin this emcee" they call it "hannibal writin"//
cuz this cat "throws no punches" like "two animals fightin"//
its wack cats you can tell i hate no wack raps and we'll celebrate//
cuz like a "crippled dude in a lobby" you need to "elevate"//
ive battled da best on da net and left em upset//
my punches hit em so hard they left no chest to protect//
left em like "weed and iraq" da way i Smoked and bombed em"//
and this dudes bout as "useful" as a "broken condemn"//
you just got "fucked by twelve bars" cuz i "fight way horny"//
should"ve never battled da champ before da lightweight tourney//
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Post by notes on Feb 27, 2006 21:11:05 GMT -5
vig i'm a give you a quick breakdown...
punches was there, personals. it was a nice verse
every bar could have ended this battle...but the ones that stuck was these here
da way vig "eatin this emcee" they call it "hannibal writin"//
cuz this cat "throws no punches" like "two animals fightin"//
you just got "fucked by twelve bars" cuz i "fight way horny"//
should"ve never battled da champ before da lightweight tourney//
Techman...respect given..you was lookin for a battle and didn't care who it was and you proved that by goin at the heavyweight champ, shows that your hungry..and if you keep that hunger you gonna elevate quickly here and start doin damage...
your flow was choppy, or maybe it was how i read it...no real punches but those will happen with time...looked like an attempt with multi's with this here...
There was a lickity-lic-loc-tic-tock-knock-knock at the door
the girlfriend line dissed vig...but didn't do any real damage...
with battles look to attack names. sigs, his rep as champ etc...anything that might hurt his character...
good job with droppin a battle verse so quickly...props to both on this...tech stay up and keep workin...
Vote for this Battle: Vigorous
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tEch maN
Junior Member
You gotta be kidding me...
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Post by tEch maN on Feb 27, 2006 21:20:50 GMT -5
Ight I understand now how you play, to bad your an ugly mother f***er I have to slay-
I was gonna save my ultimate punch line, for the last line in the lightweight, but I'll throw out the bait-
Lets say for example you wanted to work outa a cop shop-
This is what I would say-
For one you just got smoked-
For two your outta shape, I should call your superman and let you wear a red cape-
Your as big as a gurilla an ape, yo homie lay off the choclate cake-
I know all that wasn't that great, but I work for the state-
I could have you arrested, also molested-
Haha I laugh at you, your f***en ass is black and blue, what the hell happened to you-
This just in at the news desk, tech man just bought a new lex, while Vig had unprotected sex, he f***ed a witch and got hexed-
That seems good for now, I'll just back up and take a bow-
Wow 11 lines 11, I just got done jacken a 7-11-
Vig was the cashier, Vig ran in a corner and hid all I did was sneer-
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Post by Pay Jay on Feb 28, 2006 6:54:38 GMT -5
"its wack cats you can tell i hate no wack raps and we'll celebrate//
cuz like a "crippled dude in a lobby" you need to "elevate"//"
Haha shit nigga, sweeeeeet.
Tech, with bars like these:
"Yo check out this shiney new jewl on my finger, you the shitiest rap singer ever"
Yeah, looks like you shouldn't of started off battlin' with Vig.
You gonna have to prove you're better than that Tech, I guess we'll see when the tournament gets goin... Can't wait.
Vote for this Battle : Vigorous.
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Post by ThE InFaMoUs ShOw on Feb 28, 2006 7:32:29 GMT -5
see ther's a reason he's the champ
punches: vig
multis: Vig
creativity: Vig
structure: Vig
personals: vig
vocab: VIG
all in all good verse tech never get discouraged
battleing is how you elevate and alott of cats
don't have VETS to help them....take in everything
they say, they no what their talkin about...your
creativity was good work on that and make your barz
shorter
I like the fact you just wanna battle keep that
enthusiasm it breeds success
my VOTE
VIG
100
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hazerd
Junior Member
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Post by hazerd on Feb 28, 2006 9:18:50 GMT -5
opener-vig
closer-vig
punches-vig
flow-vig
mettas-vig
multies-vig
wordplay-vig
creativity-vig
vocab-vig
humor-vig
personals-vig
complexity-vig
vote-vigorous
that was a sick drop vigorous my favourite bar was
left em like "weed n iraq" da way i "smoked n bombed em
and this dude's bout as "useful" as a "broken condemn"
........fuckin sick man keep it up
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Post by ThE InFaMoUs ShOw on Mar 2, 2006 4:47:55 GMT -5
this thread is closed
VIG WINS
BY KO
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