tEch maN
Junior Member
You gotta be kidding me...
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Post by tEch maN on Aug 12, 2006 22:59:23 GMT -5
i walk with my stance low, wake up every sunday morning cold i sure as hell can't flow, when this shit has a motherfuckin hold i tried to hold my head everyway i could, still fucked up in my hood (Its motherfuckin understood!!!)
It ain't no motherfuckin way yur every gettin laid, being a gangsta ain't havin it made, fuck no you'll never have a second chance or clean slade, hearing every 5 minutes he got a blade, i gots one two, well fuck you too, i gotta fight Mohamid Ali, so afraid they go home and play wit der dollies, so when i get home i gots bitchs callin me
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tEch maN
Junior Member
You gotta be kidding me...
Posts: 98
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Post by tEch maN on Aug 13, 2006 15:51:25 GMT -5
Rusty Cage ----------------- I'm gonna break my rusty cage and run I'm gonna break my rusty cage and run
Don't even start saying what you think you know Because its 2020 and were all living in an oxygen filled dome but guess what theres still a ghetto and thats still my home
just throwing shit out there
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Post by Konkeror on Aug 17, 2006 20:16:09 GMT -5
Pretty basic, and the structure waz in paragraph form which takez away from da flow, but i waz able to catch it. Jus keep spittin and workin on structure and delivery. Like I said, find new wayz to say stuff. one
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