whats god whats life

[tah]

bare with me on the structure its coz its wrote on another forum where the layouts diffrent etc...

death nar not me i kno the lord refuses to take me from this earth
coz i had a plan laid out infront of me im destined to live since birth/
im sat here now half dead even tho im alive i feel certain my lifes cursed
i cant take back my own tears there pourin scared i aint had my moneys worth/
im payin in pain for this breath so how the fuck you expect me to accept?...
the fact tha im gonna die before i want hows it right.. when hurt is left..?/
no inspiration from you coz lets be truthful who the fuck are you?..
how can i put my beleif in you when you show no sign that my mums al pull through/
see cancers a killer but your strong right? so save her maybe then im feelin..
until then i depend on the doctor not you ..there god coz who the fuck u healin?/
my careers failin so me lovin life? nar im pretendin to like it jus for a smile..
feel like im carryin the world on my shoulders with these emotions walkin a mile/
matter fact whats my life line?...alls it is..a pen without this whos speakin?.
tongue in cheek regret these statments..pearly gates approach wen i stop breathin/
when the time comes will i have the belief to save yours to save mine when i die?
whats the point in beleivin in god this way? ..coz with the devil im certain to lie/

[Pay Jay]

I was feelin the content of this piece, gets real deep.

"see cancers a killer but your strong right? so save her maybe then im feelin..
until then i depend on the doctor not you ..there god coz who the fuck u healin?/"

That shit was hot, you should drop this shit to audio, get like a piano loop beat or something, it would tight...

Think bout it.

Jay

[CHROM3]

barz wer long but its all good mayne evry1 got a diff.style but i was feeln it for sure
homie props on this didnt have a complaint really except the bars mad long haha keep
doin ya thin dawg!!

Mad respect........

CHROM3

PEACE~1~

[tEch maN]

the flow kinda seemed choppy, but that may just be from the length of the lines. Nice though man
keep it up.